You need a lot more practice for sure, but I like your style. Above all, take time with your colors and fusing, they will make it look a whole lot better. Here are some of mine:



If you really take the time and make it look neat, then yours will be amazing. Keep it up!
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~I want to live where soul meets body
And let the sun wrap its arms around me
And bathe my skin in water cool and cleansing
And feel, feel what its like to be new~
Credit to myself for the banner, and Death Cab for Cutie for the awesome song lyrics